So now, finally on to week 4—a week for creating! Once all students have completed their
research, it’s time to write. Again, I
always begin by modeling to the students my expectations and directions. Especially with a project like this, it’s
best to give students small chunks! If
you simply say “go use your information and write”, 2nd graders will
not get your drift!
In this stage, I only have students work with ONE Graphic
Organizer (concept) at a time. I began
by writing about the Owl’s attributes. I
have students watch while I create my paragraph. This is a great time to also work in
“Beautiful Beginnings”! Even though we
are writing Non-Fiction, we still can entice our reader within that first
sentence! See the Beautiful Beginnings FREEBIE below! You can download it (at no cost!) on TpT:
I scale this down & have students glue it into their Writer's Notebook at the beginning of the year, so it is an easy resource to flip back to time and time again! |
My students helped me come up with using an action &
onomatopoeia together by starting with: “SWOOSH! An owl can soar and swoop through the air
with its broad wings.” Aren’t they so creative? They made me so proud! J
Then, I model how to form sentences from information on their Graphic Organizers. I repeat to them that “we
have already done all the hard work (research), now we just have to make
sentences!”. I walk step by step through
my G.O., forming sentences one-by-one.
Then, I send students to their desks to get out their own Graphic
Organizers and their Writer’s Notebooks.
On this first page, I walk them through writing (even though
they just watched me). We come up with a
Beautiful Beginning (then pencils up!).
Then, we write step by step through out Graphic Organizer (again,
pencils up after each time—this is a helpful visual for me to see when everyone is ready to move on!).
After we create our rough draft of the Attibutes page, I
have students Pair & Share. This is
great for many reasons:
1. They’re
proud of their work so far—so let them show it off!
2. It
helps students find any of their own mistakes while reading out loud to a
partner.
3. It
helps partners see what sounds good and get ideas from their peers!
When we all come back together after Pair & Share time,
I randomly pick a few students to read their page out loud. We give compliments and suggestions, then I
let the class go back to their desks to make any changes for the day.
This cycle repeats itself until the class has written all of
their rough drafts (generally one for each organizer, but occasionally, you can
combine some that are similar).
Depending on your time frame, you may be able to create 2 rough drafts a
day. There are some days during this
week that we only get to one, and there are others when we have lots of time
(again, this is where that “flex” time comes in handy if you have it built into
your plans!).
On Wednesday or Thursday of this week, it is all about the
next stage in the writing process: editing!
I have students edit their own works with a fun colored pen. Then they peer edit with a different color
pen. If need be, they can schedule time
with me to edit, too. During editing
time, I am sure to show students my expectations for the finished product. I ALWAYS create rubrics for major writing
assignments. I feel it makes grading
easier on my end, AND it really does give an accurate grade each time!
Here are a few examples:
Once editing is finished, it’s finally time to publish! When publishing, I give students the same
Authors as Mentors sheet as we used in week 3.
This year, I just deleted the top part so students would have more room
to write (after all, they don’t need the directions “blurb” anymore). Here are some examples of published pages:
When publishing, my students know we always write first, and
leave illustrations for last! This way,
all the major work is finished, so if students did have to rush to finish at
the last minute, they’re just rushing through their drawings (even though in an
ideal world, students wouldn’t rush through anything J).
Finally, we create our Table of Contents and our Cover/Title
Page. Friday generally tends to be a
“catch-up” day for students. This gives
them time to tie up all the loose ends and to finish their project.
They always turn out so great! Here are some for you to see:
I am utterly in love with this project, and I'm always so proud of my kiddos' hard work! It is such a great learning experience for
students, and it is such a great assignment that blends different content areas
together. I ALWAYS have students
bringing in information—some took notes on paper, some printed information from
the internet, and some even went to our public library! Also, I ALWAYS have parents tell me how much
their child enjoyed the project (and how they went on to do more at home!).
I hope you enjoyed reading how this way laid out! If you need anything, please feel free to
contact me! Also feel free to email me
with any questions, comments, or concerns!
I love to hear from you!
Keep Smiling! J
hi Jillian - great blog...good info. Glad I came by...
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Traditions Laughter and Happily Ever After
Thanks Vicky! I'm not 100% where I would like to be, yet, but give me some time and hopefully I'll grow to fit right in with the rest of you AMAZING teacher bloggers! Your page is an inspiration to me! :)
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